How to Write Amazing Supplemental Essays

An introduction to the supplemental essays that most highly selective schools require.


 THE SIX-PART COURSE INCLUDES:

  • (6) LIVE 1-hr Lessons taught by me, Ethan
  • (6) LIVE 30-min. daily Q&A Session--so you can ask me your specific essay questions (that’s 7.5 hrs of live Ethan-time)
  • PDF resource with:
    • 40 sample Activities List descriptions
    • Five Important Misuses of the Common App Additional Info section
    • (10) Great “Why us” Essays
    • (2) Great “Roommate” Essays
    • (4) Great “Extracurricular” Essays
    • (2) Great “Community” Essays
    • (4) Great “U of Chicago” Essays
    • (2) Great “Quotation” Essays
    • (2) Great “Create Your Own Class” Essays
    • (3) Great sets of short answers
    • (3) Great “How I Spent My Summer” Examples

COURSE SYLLABUS

Session One: Preliminary Sort + The Super Essay

  • Sample Application: How Doing a Thorough Job on the Brainstorming Activities Can Set You Up for a Great Application
  • A Relatively Quick and Totally Free Way to Figure Out Which of Your Essay Topics Overlap
  • The Overlapping Game (or) How Doubling--or Tripling, or Quadrupling!--Your Essays for Multiple Prompts Can Yield a “Super Essay”
  • Sample Super Essay
  • How You Can Write a Super Essay

Session Two: Activities & Awards List, Additional Info, The "Why Us" Essay

  • 5 Tips for Your Activities & Awards List
  • The Difference Between an Amazing Activities and Awards List and a Really Good One
  • Activities You May Not Have Considered Including—But That Count!
  • “Stretching the Truth” on your Activities List: A Cautionary Tale
  • How to Up-Level Your Activities and Awards List in Three Steps
  • What You Should (and Shouldn’t) Include in Your Add’l Info Section
  • How an Add’l Info Section Could Make the Difference in the Application
  • Quick Review of the Complete Guide to the "Why us" Essay
  • 3 Great "Why Us" Essays You've Never Read
  • Reviewing your "Why Us" Essays

Session Three: The Extracurricular Essay

  • The Difference Between a Regular and a “Super” Extracurricular Essay
  • Four Qualities of a Mediocre Extracurricular Essay
  • Four Qualities of an Amazing Extracurricular Essay
  • Eight Mistakes Students Make on Their Extracurricular Essays
  • A Three-Step Process to Help You Avoid All Those Mistakes
  • BEABIES: Are You on Board Yet or What?
  • How to Write an Amazing Narrative Extracurricular Essay: The Elon Musk Exercise
  • How to Write an Amazing Montage Extracurricular Essay: The UC Exercise
  • Zooming Back and Re-Examine the Big Picture
  • Upgrading Your Overlapping Game… Game
  • How You Can Apply This Approach to Almost Any Supplemental Essay
  • How to Write a Great "Community" Essay
  • Three Great Sample “Community” Essays

Session Four: The Stanford, UChicago, Create a Class, and Quotation Essays

  • How to Write the Stanford “Intellectual Idea” Essay
  • Where to Find a Bazillion Intellectual Ideas
  • The One Question the “Intellectual Idea” Essay Must (Must) Answer
  • How to Write the Stanford “Roommate” Essay
  • Finding the Right Balance Between Chaos and Order in 250 Words
  • How to Write the Stanford “What Matters” Essay
  • Three Ways to Increase the Impact of Your “What Matters” Essay
  • How to Write the "Create Your Own Class" Essay
  • Four Tips for the Quotation Essay
  • Why This Essay Isn't Really About the Quote At All
  • The U Chicago Extended Essay: How to pick a topic
  • The three qualities that U of Chicago is looking for IMHO

Session Five: Short Extracurricular Essay, Short Answers, Optional Video

  • Six Techniques for Writing the 150-Word Extracurricular Essay
  • Three More 150-Word Extracurricular Essays I Love, and Why
  • The High-Flyer Method: How to Write a Next-Level 150-Word Extracurricular Essay If You Have a Perfect GPA, Test Scores, Ridiculous Extracurriculars and Have Nothing to Prove
  • How to Make Your Short Answers Awesome: 11 Dos and Don’ts
  • A Stanford-Worthy Set of Short Answers And What Makes Them So
  • A Creative Take on the “Where Have You Lived” Essay
  • Quick Tips for Creating a Great (Optional) Video
  • How to Make Sure Your Application Is Doing Its Job

Session Six: Ask-Me-Anything-You-Want Day

  • How should I write the (insert any essay topic) essay?
  • Can you give me some feedback on my essay?
  • Do you always wear that bow tie? Like, even to sleep?
  • (Insert your question here.)

FAQ

WAIT, WHY IS THIS GUIDE CALLED “INCOMPLETE”?

Because, with hundreds of essay prompts each year--many of which exist for a year and then disappear--no guide could be complete. (Well, I suppose it could, but can you imagine…?)

HAVING SAID THAT: this guide tackles the essays you’re most likely to encounter.

What if I can’t afford it?

As with all my courses, I have some pay-what-you-can spots available. Just fill out the pay-what-you-can form on the registration page.

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